Hi David,
I may have more questions than answers, but I'll see if I can help. First of all good quality cable ties are fine, personally I have a mix of both, cable ties where the connections are more or less permanent, and stainless clamps at places like the carb. connections.
The first thing I would suggest is to go back and check your work, it's easy to get the return line and supply line mixed up. Also check the "O" ring in the fuel seperator/fuel filter. Also I have not had a lot of success cleaning the fuel control valve, I would suggest for $20.00 or so just replace it. When you change the lines it usually stirs up debris, so it's important to go through the carbs. you may get lucky and only need to clean the carb. fuel filters. You can try priming the motor by pouring a little premix down each cylinder, but I have found all you usually need to do it use the choke to get fuel flowing.
Lou